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Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part One
I looked at my small body in the mirror. The blue in the short, strapless dress brought out the blue specks in my dark grey eyes. My long, dark brown ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Part 1 of Group Novel
ERRAN: A shot rang out across the ruins of what once was a miraculous city full of life. Now, as more shots echoed through the black, dead night, New York ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: No Title. (I need your opinion)
ahaha. You guys, it might be easier if you made a new thread for each chapter x)
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Ruka
Last art upload for the day :) Whew! I'm actually quite proud of this one because I think I learned a lot while making it. I posted the sketch of ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Help It
Well this piece fell out of my brain. I'm not even sure what it is myself so the meaning is open for interpretation x) What do you guys think of ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #2
Well here's the rest of 'em :) This one was in my art dump last week as a sketch. A highly referenced sketch. I realize her arms are messed up ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #1
So here's just some things I did this week in my spare time. None of these were taken too seriously, but I thought I'd post it anyway. All comments are ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 2
So even though chapter 1 wasn't my cup of tea, I thought I'd give this novel a second chance and review part 2! :) Chapter 2 Switching dorms As I ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 1
Walking to Technology seemed longer today, period was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid purple and blue eyes, his shaggy fair hair, just thinking of him gave ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: 0. Prologue (Redrafted)
Oh wow, this is such a late reply sorry! I had your review saved on my laptop all this time I just forgot about it and now you've changed so ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Spirit
Hey I'm back :) I assume this is the paragraph you added- I lingered around the house for a few more moments before decided to go back to my tree. ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
...Louis stared quietly into the fire on the hearth through intense grey eyes, aching all over still from the fight. Ira sat next to him, bleeding from his nose and ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Ira walked ahead of the company, his eyes analyzing the bleak land. From what he could see, there was nothing out there, at least, no Underworlders. Ahead of them was ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Spirit
Heya Mango :) Wow, this is very good. You have a very mature, no-nonsense way of writing that I really like. The five reasons for dying thing in the beginning ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: flames on memories
Hey Emiloo :) It was a beautiful house, old and wooden. I remember moving in. I was only six but as it was the first day I set eyes on ...
Mar 6, 2011
