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Re: Carefree
The colors are really beautiful on this :) Your expression really brings it all to life, and the title is perfect. The only thing I wish is that the light ...
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Re: Dragon digital painting
I'll have to see if I can download that somewhere, then :) I got a Bamboo Fun for christmas, and have been working in Corel Paint Essentials 4.0
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Re: Rapunzel
Hey again! :D This is very nice! The body proportions are perfect, and I think her dress is lovely and wonderfully shaded :) For some reason I really really like ...
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Re: Black and White?
Hi!! Holy smokes, girl. You are GOOD. I'd argue that you really do know how to use your pens. One suggestion though- the dark black one you use for font ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Dragon digital painting
WOAH, what program and tablet do you use?! That is amazing! And I just can't fathom that this is a first attempt. I'm new at digital art too, and I'm ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Flower painting
I agree with it needing to be just a bit brighter. The darker shades of gray make the flower look a little bit transparent at those spots. But besides that, ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This one is very short compared to your other poems :) It’s not a bad thing, it just means there is less to critique! So I hope I can still ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Deep down inside they have not a heart Their eyes pierce at me like frozen darts ‘at me’ isn’t describing this suitably. What was it piercing exactly? Your heart, your ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Book Covers, Drawings'z ETC.
You've got a lot of good stuff here :) The book covers are nice, but I'm confused- did you take the pictures yourself or did you just edit them? About ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: deleted
If I had nine hearts Would it push me to love? Would it make me bear the gifts He sends me from above? For some reason I don’t really like ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part Two
Back again for part 2 :) “You too, Elizabeth.” I heard him whisper again before I was out of earshot. I felt that this was pretty cliché. It seems like ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part 2
Hey there :) I didn't read your first part, but here I am. Calypso stared blankly out to sea. The helicopter had dropped her off around an hour before, and ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: The Rules of Magic
Hey there :) "Abduco!" the boy called, imitating what the man three feet away from him had done; nothing happened. The dark figure laughed humorlessly. "Of course not. comma " ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Snap Chapter 1
Hiya :) The pale, no comma yellow rays of the moon illuminated my skin as I sat upon the brick wall near the lake of silver and blue. I cannot ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: *Blue Skies* Part of part 1
Hi there :) No reviews yet? I'll help you out. I picked my self up from the ground. I finished the bread loaf the Orphanage had given me, their sick ...
Mar 16, 2011
