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Re: Chapter 1
Hiya :) Ross Taylor His face was relaxed, but there was something about it, no comma that made me uncomfortable. Something that hadn’t been there before. Something my mind had ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: I hated school
Hey there :D I hated school. There were too many of them, ghosts I mean. Always hovering around me and trying to drain me of energy so they could do ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Chapter 12 WOOT WOOT!! ... '... The Sky Diviness has become too powerful,' Rauma stated as she leaned back in her throne, 'Every day her League grows in both quantity ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter Three
Heylo again :) The girl brushed her hair from her forehead, flopping back onto her bed, trying to erase the nightmare’s brutal images from her mind with no luck. Pulling ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Manga Art #1
Hey there! :D The best thing about the first pic is how much emotion you put into her eyes. You should put this much detail into all your pics! Realistically, ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
loading.... loading...loading... YES!!!! I can finally see it!! XD Alright, so these are flipping gorgeous. After all your editing, I have to say that the second pic is my favorite ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part 4
Calypso and Adonis whirled around to face the woman in the doorway. "Aphrodite!" Calypso cried. Her heart started pounding wildly. "Hello, Calypso," The goddess said with a smirk. Calypso did ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Scars:Impending Storm, Chapter Two
I started down the road after classes had ended, not sure where I was going. I wanted to talk to Jamie, but she was gone. I couldn't find her anywhere. ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-Part 3
Athena's silvery loom clicked back forth. Calypso sat Indian-style on the bed, waiting for Athena to start the story. "The blind poet Homer once told the story of the Odyssey. ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter One
I could see my breath when I exhaled. It was the white transparent color that always makes it seem as if an unknown life-force has just left your mouth. It ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Single Bullet Chapter 1
We all knew that Marco was going to be put to death. Most of us knew anyway. With the only exception being Marco himself, everybody else was curious to see ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Blackened Runes - Chapter One
Would've that been so hard? Would that have been so hard? The kid in the wheelchair is the most interesting thing in this story so far. The whole real estate ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Blackened Runes - Prologue
He could see the wind playing with her skirt almost carelessly. I’m not a fan of your opening line. It’s just not interesting enough. Liven it up with something original ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Elements: The Question - Chapter 1
For all those fatalists out there wondering what the end of the world will be like, here’s a hint: it’s boring. Dead boring. Out-of- my your -mind-with-boredom boring. Yep, this ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
Wow, these are really cool! I love your work to pieces, Suki :D The first is my favorite; the blue color is very calming and the gold trim has a ...
Mar 24, 2011
