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  • Art & Photography Re: Nao

    I had to give this guy some kind of name, so I picked Nao, which is Japanese for honest. I got a lot of positive response from when I posted ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Water Dragon with Rider

    This is great! I really like it :D The dragon seems to have a lot of life in it, and to me your lineart looked very well done. Everything seems ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: And it ain't from 2009 ;D

    Hey Dream! I'm really glad I get to review some new stuff for you! I'll do this pic by pic. :D #1- This one was probably my fav because of ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Abstract Life: Binding

    Hey! Finally I have my review. I did it a little different than I normally do. Usually, I go through the nitpicks and then have the overall comments at the ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Family Feud: Chapter 3

    As we are riding towards the entrance, my stomach starts growling. “Dad, can we stop to eat somewhere? I’m like so hungry.” I whine. “No. We can not we are ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Family Feud: Chapter 2

    The next few minutes were silent, no one talked and just watched where dad had stood. Then I turned to my mother in hopes of salvaging my attempt. “Mom, can ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Family Feud

    “DAD! MOM! I’m leaving for school.” Usually, it’s a good thing to refrain from using caps lock in your story. The only place you see it is in children’s books, ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Nostalgia

    Hey :) The first thing I noticed was the spacing of the eyes. For some reason, they look too far apart, and too angular. The one on the right has ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: MS Paint - Beach

    I think you did a really good job on getting the hair and clothes on right :) I thought those were actually part of the base! I have to say ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: YWS Flyer

    A little color wouldn't hurt :) And this is just me, but the opening line 'Do you like to write?' just sounds a bit uninteresting. If you could try to ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: MS Paint

    Hey :D I've never done a base before. I suppose it would give you good practice if you wanted to jump right into the colors and shading. But personally, sketching ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Give Me Back My Soul

    Transcend the realms of time and flow deep into my soul where a heavy mist awaits. When undertones drown security in a sea of “discussions”. When sorrows lurk in the ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Ipad - Doodle Buddy Art

    Hi! I don't know anything about the Ipad doodling, so I'll just say that these designs look pretty simple. If you really wanted them to stand out you should spend ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime Drawings

    Yeah, these are quite good! Especially since you're 13 :D Honestly, I just started taking drawing seriously less than a year ago, so it's pretty impressive that you're thinking about ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deleted

    damn, my computer's being a tard x( I hope this posts ok '...And that's how I ended up here,' Louis sighed as he and Lyrah walked amongst the ruins of ...

    Apr 15, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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