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Re: My Hiro ~ Prologue and chapter 1; part 1
Prologue: He was running out of time. I was uncontrollable, inconsolable. I was the mess I feared becoming again and yet thats exactly what became of me I don’t understand ...
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Re: The Puppet Master (New Version)
He was waiting for her in the study, the place of his birth. He stood in front of her desk with his back to the doorway, running a gnarled finger ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Prologue
It was no problem! I enjoyed reviewing it x) After reading chapter one, I feel like his loneliness is directly related to his lack of family. He seems to be ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Chapter One
Hey again! Sorry if my reviews are a little behind x) Chapter One I awoke to the same sounds as before, laughing and speaking. All was enveloped in darkness now ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Anime/Manga Drawing
Hey, this is great! I don't think I could draw very well when I was 12, so it's great to see that you're getting a head start! The more you ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Jonah In the Night- Prologue
Prologue. Night I am Jonah. I guess a lot of what we do is in our names. My own name reminds me of a Biblical tale in which a prophet ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: The World of Photoshop.
Before I got my tablet for Christmas, I only used to dabble in art. I'd draw things on a whim and didn't really like how they turned out. But ever ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: assorted art
Yay! I get to finally see some of your art! :D It was already said, but since you don't have a scanner you should take a little more care in ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 25: Unwanted Contact
Marcus cut the engine. The boat slowed in the open ocean. David was sitting on the bench, loading his rifle. Scott sat inside with Marcus. To me, the choppy sentence ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: The Story of William Krenith(Part 1/4)
I apologize in advance for any errors, it's almost 3 am x) PART ONE: Breaking the Fringe of Corruption Akron, Ohio-Late Summer, 2076 I think there should be spacing between ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Year One Chapter 3: edited
Alexis stirred in her sleep, the package from the night before had slipped out of her grasp during the night and lied on the floor. Rosa was coming inside, returning ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Year One Chapter 2: EDITED
Alexis slept deeply, her breath short, her chest rising and falling slowly. Her fingers wrapped around the blanket, clutching it tightly as she dreamt. Her eyelids fluttered quietly as she ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
There was a strong scent on the air, a sickening mixture of flesh and blood and smoke. It was becoming more potent as Zayn approached the Little Rock Settlement. This ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Unifinished GIMP Painting
Hey Jash! This is really great! I've recently started working with GIMP, so it's nice to see how someone else uses it. I can tell this took a lot of ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey Lele, I love this. I really do :) This is your best poem so far and you should feel very proud of it! I could never write poetry, and ...
Apr 24, 2011
