-
Re: Alchemists
Prologue: Guardians Tale Midnight, Brisbane City. The skyscrapers glittered as they reflected the light coming from the cars and shops below. Standing on top of a skyscraper was were three ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Nefarious Purposes 2
Chapter 2 I plop down on my bed and let out a groan. “Why?” I exclaim to the heavens. “Why me?” “Come on now,” my best friend Bethany chimes in ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Nefarious Purposes 1
Chapter One “Psst…” “Ugh.” I grunt in protest. “Psst…Cantaloupe!” A finger pokes me in the side. “Ugh-nuhhh!” I roll over as best as I can in the back seat, trying ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Endless Fantasy- Epoch 3
I could tell ;) And thanks! I'm so glad I'm helping. And it helps my reviewing skills when my reviews are critiqued as well! :D So thanks!
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 7 - 9
CHAPTER SEVEN Michael Haley walked into his house like a man on a mission, which technically he was. His job had just become exponentially harder, all because of the impatience ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 4 - 6
CHAPTER FOUR The jagged peaks of the Himalayas sliced through the thick layer of clouds like shears through a sheep’s fluffed wool, piercing the placid sky above. Snow coated their ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Soliloquy #1: Is This Me?
lol, how can I start this review? I originally typed 'this is cool' but then I remembered the first part of the soliloquy x) So I'm actually at a loss ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 1 - 3
BLUR THE LINES PART ONE - ALIGNMENT CHAPTER ONE The night sky was suddenly split open by a million shafts of blazing light as the Mach Ones blasted over the ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Endless Fantasy- Epoch 3
Epoch 3 I dreamt of ebony and sinew. “Sit here. On my lap, son.” his face hidden, gone from my memory. I can’t speak because I’m too young- but I ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter Three
I flippin love you for editing ^_^ For year and years I had whole heatedly believed that somehow, somewhere, there was life in a completely unknown place. I think I ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Chapter One, Part Two
(continued from chapter one, part one) “Alright, looks like we’re here.” Virgil pulled the red Lincoln to a stop by the curb, and the three suited men exited the car. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter Three
“What is wrong with you?” “Nothing! She was hurt, I was only trying to help!” “Well you shouldn't be away from the ca-” “Shh! She's sleeping!” “Cal, put her back ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter Two
The pounding in my head woke me from my dull unconsciousness. I realized with confusion this is contradicting. You can’t come to a confused realization. that I was no longer ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
“Not everything is fun and games, you know,” Kailee repeated to me for the tenth time that morning. “I know that. I'm not saying anything about fun and or the ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
“What's with you and these crazy ideas?” “Haha, you're like some sort of fairy tale!” “Calm down! Stop twirling around every which way.” Kailee, my sister, I wonder... What would ...
Jun 14, 2011
