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Re: Hit the Black
Alex reached across and plucked the phone from its cradle. Since you already referred to it as a cradle in the beginning, I would try using a different word. I ...
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Re: Buttons
Reading this definitely evoked images from The Boy in the Striped Pajamas. It must’ve been a real bummer when you realized someone had already come up with the idea before ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Charlie
“I spent a couple days at the hospital before they sent me home. Nerve damage. I remember how I fell asleep right away on the first night. Exhaustion. [b]But the ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: I know you want my slippers...
I have to agree with Pink about not knowing what this was at first glance. I think it's because you've edited it so much that there's no line distinguishing one ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Fighting for Justice
So I came up with the outline for this ages ago, but gave up on it because I didn't feel like I had the skillz to draw it yet. I ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Name the character!
I recently bought an anatomy book for manga artists, so this was originally just a practice to try out a different pose. But it was turning out pretty well so ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Anime Boy Head
I colored this one pretty quick. To me, the hair and shirt look a little weird, but I wanted to get other people's thoughts on it. I saved the original ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 6
Chapter Six “What. Are those?” I yelped, looking out the passenger side window into Jonah’s yard. He had taken me out to lunch where we sat at a booth talking ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 5
When Laynie got back from her jazz band lessons, she found Jonah and I on the couch, my head on his lap. We were watching the old Russian cartoons. Animals ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Anime doodles
Hey there ^_^ My favorite has to be Peach! Although I didn't see Peach at first, just a pretty girl in a dress. I think if you really payed attention ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 4
I swatted at my nose lightly, brows creased and snuggled down into my pillow. Stupid flies. It brushed against me again and I growled, swatting. I heard a low snort. ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Carry me Home Chapter 3
The next morning, I crawled off the mattress early and got ready for the day in Laynie’s spare bathroom that branches off the kitchen next to the mudroom. Laynie was ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 2
Chapter Two We turned the corner into Laynie’s driveway and my mouth dropped open. Her driveway was full of cars, none of which I could really see since it had ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 1
He wasn’t supposed to be here. My legs pressed against the back of the couch as he continued to come closer, making my skin crawl. He asked me why I ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter Three
A kiss. Just a simple kiss. And now he's gone. I have the same comment HorsebackWriter had; this took me by surprise. I was expecting the whole story to be ...
Jul 17, 2011
