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Hey! I liked this :) It actually put me in a good mood, which is saying a lot XD You're getting better with every poem I see, and you were ...

Hey Soul, wow it's been ages since I've read something of yours O_O Anyway, I liked this. By the end I was wanting more :) If I can offer a ...

This is definitely my favorite poem of yours, Suki. You know how bad I am at reviewing and understanding this stuff, but I just want you to know that I ...

Hey there! I can only see the last three pics, sorry! I don't know if it's my computer or a different error. These are pretty good pics, it can be ...

Very nice ^_^ I even like your signature lol. You're really smart with editing, you know just how to make an ordinary pic look good. The faucet was my favorite ...

Ok, THIS is now my favorite piece of yours! XD It's hilarious! I'm reading/reviewing in a library so I had to keep myself from laughing out loud xD. I was ...

The night grew old, his fellow knights I know they are two different words, but the repetition of ‘night (knight)‘ stopped me for a second. Maybe you could call them ...

“Welcome brothers to this Brilliant day! This glorious, glorious day” Eyes gazing into the dark endless sky past the eternal forests and into the snow capped mountains. This sounds weird. ...

Another good in-between chapter. I liked it. I absolutely LOVED the twist you threw in. It was so unexpected my jaw dropped and I had to read the sentence twice. ...

“Not even a little?” he asked, period his hair was mussed up. I smoothed it down only for it to spring back up. Very nice descriptions throughout this, I could ...

“Good morning.” A low voice whispered in my ear. I opened my eyes for the briefest of moments and smiled. “Good morning.” I said with a sigh, a yawn. I ...

“Are you sure you’re going to be okay? I mean, I don’t have to go if you don’t want me to. You seem really antsy today.” Laynie said. She had ...

Jonah showed up and at (not good to have a typo in the first line x) Make sure you proofread) Laynie’s with an armful of canvas boards and a duffel ...

“So what’s the plan for the day?” I ask Laynie as she’s putting her hair up in the bathroom. “We. Are taking a girl day to ourselves. No boys. Just ...

So I'm halfway done, I'll be posting the rest when I finish the back cover. I came up with the idea of holding hands from the title of the novel, ...