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Re: Hair Therapy 2
So I have a new best friend, and that new best friend is a mechanical pencil ^_^. Before I was just using regular #2's to draw with, but I found ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
Hey ^_^ I'm here to review for ya. Jesse James was never a fool, He could handle a gun like a thread on a spool. A gun crazed criminal the ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: When A Princess Fights
I'm so glad you linked me to this ^_^ I love her outfit, I love the whole way you styled her actually. It's really unique! The neck thing, the colors, ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
Hey I just had to check out one of your poems :) And I'm really glad I did! This is great :D They say the windows to the heart, no ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 16
“So.” I blushed, unsure of what exactly was going on. Jonah stood across from me, the worn wooden floor a vast expanse between us. I could still feel my mouth ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 15
Chapter Fifteen The garden stretched around a small cabin and out of sight. Flowers grew wild and untamed and the only sign of human interference was the small stone footpath ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 14
I tapped my fingers against the dashboard, wondering about what on earth he could have planned in such a short time. We’d only been at the mall an hour ago, ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 13
Jonah sat in the back seat of The Chum Buggy, with Laynie and me up front. He braided the hair at the nape of my neck, sending little bursts of ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Flames of Death
Very awesome :D You do a really great job with the freestyle writing. To me, all of your entries had great imagery and my attention was hooked all the way ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Journeying Through my Mind
Hey :) Well, I'm terrible at critiquing poems, but I'll give it a shot! I'll keep wandering my dank Mind until I find a place to think. Uniridescent foot falls ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Clouds
Very cloudy :) Looks like a storm's coming.
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: My Style Goth (ish) Drawing
I had soooo much fun drawing his hair :D I've never done anything in the Goth/Emo whatever you want to call it style, this was kinda on a whim. But ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: "Stop and Stare" novel cover (final edits)
Thanks for the reply, Star ^_^ As long as you have the artist's permission it's all good :) I really like the choice you did with the red, that was ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: One of Those Days...; First Edit
I liked this :) It held my attention from the beginning, and at the fifth line I was like 'Woah!' and suddenly everything fit together and I was pulled right ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
Hey, I'm finally looking at some of your stuff :) I think this is excellent. Personally, the first line didn't catch me. It just felt to obvious. At the beginning ...
Jul 30, 2011
