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Not your best chapter, I have to say. Plot-wise, there's nothing here that is essential. As fun as it is to read about your characters having a good time, swimming ...

Woowww :) So purdy. I'm always amazed when I see more realistic drawings like this. Whenever I try to draw this way, things end up turning manga/anime on me x/ ...

Hey Ty, it's been a while ^_^ Glad to see you've got more chapters up! I chuckled softly, choking back a small explosion of giggles. “What?” Jonah said, covering his ...

Hiya :) So first off I have to say that I'm no good at reviewing poetry, so bear with me lol. Overall, I thought this was really good ^_^ It ...

Hey Twinkle! I've finally gotten around to reviewing some art for you! :D Honestly, I love this. The second pic is definitely better. I immediately noticed the color to her ...

Awesomeness at its finest!!! Like x1000 XD Great job.

This is really cool, I like it! :D It looks like some wacked-out doodle, in a good way. That's before I noticed you based it off the pic, but it's ...

This is definitely my favorite pic of yours! It's beautiful! This is a perfect cityscape shot, everything looks so... measured? Like the buildings just look too perfect to be real ...

Hey! I'm awful at reviewing poetry x) But I liked this! The words were nice, and flowed really well. I love how the ending rhymed a bit. For me, the ...

She drags me along behind him her a few more blocks and then stops at a fire escape. Spitz’ technically, I think it should be Spitz’s, because you can’t leave ...

I huff [and] return to my own thoughts, to the third thing I simply must do when I am free. I did not hear anymore after the soldiers’ no apostrophe ...

So I don't like this one, but I wanted opinions on it anyway. To me, it's too girly, the expression weird, and I see something wrong with her hips but ...

Chapter Three: I should probably learn some self-control before I attack someone who can’t heal. We continued studying human subjects for four days. Two days before my birthday, Hayden, another ...

Chapter Two: We all have our talents—even if some of them aren’t real. A tall, blonde woman walked into the library and pulled a few books off the shelves. She ...

Hey, I haven’t reviewed anything new in a while so I’m gonna give this a shot ^_^ First of all, I love vampire stories. Even though there are a bajillion ...