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Re: Still Untitled- Part 1!
thanks so much! i was a little worried about my first post- you never know what people will think! :) i actually have a lot more on this story but ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Still Untitled- Part 1!
this is my first story i've posted so i hope you all will like it! ANY reviews will be much appreciated (no matter how harsh! i actually like the harsh ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: The pen is mightier....
i always thought it would look best if the pencil and sword were crossed like an X and the YWS was printed over them. it just looks cool in my ...
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
google google google! searched for writing websites. :elephant:
Sep 19, 2009 -
Re: Acomia- Land of Dragon Trainers
“There girl, hold still, I’m almost done.” I hit the bolt with my hammer until it fits smoothly with the rest of the armour. The dragon snorts and dances in ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Venolf War - Chapters 1 - 6
Chapter 1 They’re getting closer. They’re gaining on me, and fast. This is the third and probably the last time that these stupid, stupid electric creatures are chasing me. Twice ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Sour Girl
Personally, for my taste, this has just a little too much sexual content- even thought it fits really well- I thought that maybe a few parts could be toned down. ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: What kind of title draws you in?
usually just simple ones. i mostly get drawn in by the cover, really. a few names that caught my attention were Unwind and Full Tilt (both by Neil Shusterman and ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero part 3
Kevin was sitting in his room inside the Dark Wing when he heard the news. He froze, leaning over to bandage his leg. “ . . . Matilda Darley has ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero part 2
It turned out that the Dark Wing was right around the corner. Kevin must have circled back during the chase. ‘That, is the last time I go shopping.’ He thought. ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero
NOTE: This story takes place on another planet that I made up. It is more technology advanced than Earth. You don’t need this ^ Sirens filled the air, echoing off ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: how can I 'undo' a 'mary sue'?
reading that small profile, i do kind of get the 'perfect' person feeling. when i think of secret agent computer whizzes, i kind of think nerd. Not in the 'pimple ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?
I forget where I read it, but my favorite writing tip is to think of a story you would like to read, then write it. i LOVE this one ^^ ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
a guy sitting alone in a room wearing a cowboy hat, writing novels. TheBlackSheep
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Exile - Chapter 1 - Part 1
The voice of what Tristan assumed to be the King said "No! Please!" He heard the King release a muffled scream. i'm not the best at giving advice, but i'll ...
Jul 3, 2009
