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I really loved it, RainStorm! J I loved all your characters, and the idea of the Byari. Even though this is only your first installment, I can tell the plot ...

i didn't really like it. i've read so much poetry that sounds just like this so i didn't get any feeling of originality. it sounded like you wrote from your ...

well first of all i'll say that i would love to see a second part to your story and see where this is going. right now it seems really basic; ...

this is nice. i really like the colors but the coloring looks a little scratchy. actually a lot scratchy. there are a lot of white spaces in this pic. the ...

pretty, pretty fish. it looks like if you'd eat it, it would taste like candy or something. well, that's what popped into my head.

yes, i get what you mean. i suppose i could change the name for copyright's sake, but it will always be rydia in my head. i wasn't planning on getting ...

i loved this beginning!! i liked a lot of the things you said, like the part about everything being so 'white' in her life. the only feeling i wasn't too ...

A lot of other writers have the same issues, code names or types on which their characters are based on for inspiration. This is how those 'who would play who' ...

well, this was a nice start, i thought. it could be one of those super short prolouges and then the next chapter you could have him in Alaska, or you ...

brass: thanks for the suggestion :) the paragraph with the 'she's' have been anonymously terrible so i will get right on that. thanks for reading!

As I sit here listening to sad Taylor Swift songs, I realize how shitty my life really is. My love life, that is. The rest of my life is pretty ...

It was a hot evening. The air was warm where they were, cramped up within the trees of this elaborate, wealthy place. It congested around them in their large group, ...

This is the first chapter of a three part series, it starts off kinda slow, sorry. I always knew I was different, just how different never hit me until now. ...

To Jet: thanks so much for ripping me apart! :) no really, it was very helpful! i was unsure about how a lot of the grammar was supposed to be, ...

sorry, ive never heard of it. though i would say if you're interested in it, go ahead and read it.