xXTheBlackSheepXx

this is my first story i've posted so i hope you all will like it! ANY reviews will be much appreciated (no matter how harsh! i actually like the harsh ...

This piece kinda fell out of my brain, and i'm not sure if it's any good or not. Any reviews would be really helpful because i'm trying to figure out ...

viewtopic.php?t=61462Catch up on my first chapter! ^^ I'm a little worried about what I've done with this. Some parts sound a little cheesy to me, so i could use some ...

His first step out the door was nearly a fatal one. In the time since he arrived at the motel, a violent storm activated. Rain was coming down in heavy ...

*I wasn't too sure about the rating; there's blood and emotional trauma in this first chapter, so i guess watch out for that. Any reviews are immensely appreciated, so thanks ...

Three days later, I had made it out of the Omosede Forest. A wide expanse of lush grasslands now lay ahead of me, and I could see the sky clearly ...

It wasn’t that long ago when I moved to Maine with my father. Back at my old home in New York, my mom had gotten a promotion to her already ...

The next few days dragged on at an impossibly slow rate. Mom seemed to show up at the house more often (maybe it was just my imagination), but I avoided ...

It was the morning of the fifth day. Squalls of cool wind gave me liberation from the sweltering heat of midday. The air was clean and clear, mimicking the pure ...

I woke up the next morning at 9:00a.m. to my alarm. After I reached over to shut it off, I rubbed my eyes groggily, and groaned. I was still so ...

Neither of us bothered to start up another conversation, so after a few more minutes of awkward silence I reclined my chair as far back as it would go and ...

We remained in good spirits for the rest of way, humming along to the radio and pointing out novelty license plates. In the many hours we spent in the car, ...

As soon as we pulled into the short, concrete driveway, the door to the house swung open, and a man, who I assumed to be my father, emerged.Mom parked the ...

I awoke in a cold, dark room. In my drowsiness, I pulled at the blanket underneath me, trying to cover myself with it. I stopped immediately when my nose dug ...

This is something I wrote randomly, without any thought to where I might take it. I'm curious to see what people think of it, so all comments are appreciated, no ...