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Its short yet sweet and almost full of goodness. It needs a bit of tweaking. Maybe you should extend it a bit :D Go into more detail about her feelings. ...

Haha, I can hear your thoughts now. "Wow, what a title!" This poem was written for a homework assignment for English. It was supposed to be a personification poem and ...

I agree with the first 3 people who replied before me. I have written about this sorta stuff so much already (and saying that makes me feel like such a ...

First off, it's disturbing, but seeing as I have a disturbing mind, I really like this poem. Second, I think that the underlined line is fine just the way it ...