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Name: Aiyana Age: 17 Gender: Female Race: Ingeminan Animal: Wolf Element: Fire Appearance: A brown and white wolf with dark brown eyes. She stands about 5'7 ft tall, when on ...

I know you were probably hoping for a way to improve, but everything was great. You had great descriptions such as 'scratchy paper voices', 'like clowns on tightropes', and 'floating ...

I understand that. What I ment was, you just say 'his footsteps' [house]' then you jump to 'dog'. I didn't mean perspective, like you just need to go in one ...

Hello, as others mentioned above, you don't have a set topic. Its a bit confusing because you jump from one thing to a next. From a house to dog, which ...

Linder cranes her long neck around and looks over her new armour. It's armor. The training camps are (In my opinion) the best place in the world. I don't think ...