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Re: Sparks; (rough draft chapter one)
Heya briggsy!! This is a great start to a novel and I cant wait to see what you've got lined up for future chapters!! :) I love the way you ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Excerpt from 'Hunted'
Hello, Laura!! This is great!! Freewriter and Cotton have really covered the points that I was going to make so I won't bore you by repeating them all :). This ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Stone Prolouge
Hello Axel and welcome to YWS!! It was 1857 or so when I, Alexander DeKnight "It was around 1857 when I" would have been a better opening as it flows ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Right and Wrong
Hello ofir!! I'm going to review your piece today!! Yay!! :D Firstly, this is a great beginning to a story; I can tell already that there is a great story ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Plain and Fabulous
Hellooo PlanetaryGal! I will be reviewing your work now; I'm on a reviewing high...anyway... This is a great opening and it really allows you to get to know the characters. ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: All Along the Way - Chapter 1
Heya Rachel, love this so far. There's just those few nitpicks that need to be said though, so here I go: I met Natasha when we were in the third ...
Jun 19, 2011