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Heya, this is much better. :D Still very speech based though, but you've added better personal thoughts. You also took what everyone said onboard and made the first chapter really ...

Haha, I love this. I have to ask is that a real desire of yours? It seems like such a good one. You have two little mistakes: a character based ...

Hello :D I have noticed that your writing is very speech based. You have a lot more speech then anything else. I know it can be tricky to add the ...

Granted, but after spending five minutes looking it up becasue I didn't know what it meant you would be my first victim from it. I wish I know every word ...

They're Champion (Chipmunk and Chris Brown) If you really are a telepath then what am I thinking right now??

Hello ally. :D This is a really good piece and I really like it. Shadow has already pointed out the grammar mistakes, which is good becasue I'm not good with ...

Yay, this was brilliant! Well done, you've really improved this and in such a short space of time as well. I'm very impressed! You kept all the good bits from ...

This is something that popped into my head a few days ago. I've drafted it, reviewed it and re-reviewed it but I would love your opinion. I don't know wether ...

Hello, I'm going to be reviewing you post now :) This is very short and I'm a bit confused as to where you're going with it and what its purpose ...

Heya VBall! I'll be reviewing you now :D. Ugh! Who the heck bangs on your door that hard in the middle of the night? Seeing as my parents are away ...

Heya, One thing I should point out is grammar is really not my best point so I've learnt to stay away from it during reviewing. I read through confetti's review ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm glad to see a fellow Englander on here. I have to say that there isn't enough :) Although I see that you are from London, so ...

Wow, that was kind of creepy... The way you tell your story is very intense. I love how the story twisted from just one of Abbie's friends telling it as ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! :D You write fanfic, huh? That's really cool. I've been wanting to write a fanfic for ages but my novels keep getting in my way!! ...

Welcome to YWS! You'll love it here! I write fantasy myself so I hope I can be of some help when you post your novel up. I'll be sure to ...