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Re: Change One Letter [2]
Ride
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
Don't Hold Your Breath (Nicole Scherzinger) What's the best thing you have ever done?
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Sparks; (rough draft chapter one)
Heya briggsy!! This is a great start to a novel and I cant wait to see what you've got lined up for future chapters!! :) I love the way you ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Excerpt from 'Hunted'
Hello, Laura!! This is great!! Freewriter and Cotton have really covered the points that I was going to make so I won't bore you by repeating them all :). This ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Help, please!
Hello keren!! Welcome to YWS!! Don't worry if you don't know what to do, lots of people feel that way when they first start (including me!!) but it is so ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Hi, call me writergirl15
Hello!! Welcome to YWS!! :D I don't know the sites that you've mentioned but if you love to write then this is the place to be!! YWS is an amazing ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Stone Prolouge
Hello Axel and welcome to YWS!! It was 1857 or so when I, Alexander DeKnight "It was around 1857 when I" would have been a better opening as it flows ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: The singing game
House Of Fun (By Madness) What is your perfect name?
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Hello :]
Hello Laura!! Welcome to YWS!! :D I'm from the UK!! Wonderful wet UK!! (Sorry but at the moment it hasn't stopped raining almost all week here :? ) Where in ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: *grins shyly* Hi there...
Hey Veritas! Welcome to YWS!! You'll love it here. I've only been a member for about a week now and I love it. Everyone is so friendly and helpful so ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Right and Wrong
Hello ofir!! I'm going to review your piece today!! Yay!! :D Firstly, this is a great beginning to a story; I can tell already that there is a great story ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Hey All :)
Thanks to all of you have already said hello! Apple you made my day with you whole pizza theory; I loved it :D I hope I can keep up with ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Plain and Fabulous
Hellooo PlanetaryGal! I will be reviewing your work now; I'm on a reviewing high...anyway... This is a great opening and it really allows you to get to know the characters. ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: All Along the Way - Chapter 1
Heya Rachel, love this so far. There's just those few nitpicks that need to be said though, so here I go: I met Natasha when we were in the third ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: The Warriors (Prologue)
Thanks for your comment, Dakota. I've changed all the typos that you pointed out have taken in everything you said. I'm gunna alter it once I get some more critique ...
Jun 19, 2011