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Re: Vampire Prison - Chapter One
Hey :] Thank you for such a good read! I liked your story and your style. The only bad thing I noticed is your story was a bit rushed. That's ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Life [Prologue]
What is life? Is it something that only exists once, or does it recycles itself over and over after it expires each time? I really like this opening. None know ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: The Invasion- Prolouge
Okay, I'll try to fix it. It's not complete because I'm always adding more, thank you! Oh, and I posted it in the wrong section of short stories, >:|
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: The Invasion- Prolouge
First things first, yes we all hate Prologues. But, I'm leaving it in here. Don't like it? Don't critique it. Be nice & Thank you for your time! I sat ...
Oct 14, 2010
