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Oh my shenanigans! I love this. The analogies are gorgeous. The writing is fluid. And best of all, you have a very mature voice that only makes this piece of ...

Well, this is a rather sad piece of work. It's a very good start, but I suggest putting more feeling into your poetry. Describe your feelings. Compare them to something ...

Thank you for the input. ^^

This is absolutely beautiful. The Greek references take my breath away. The descriptions allow me to visualize, rather than just read aimlessly. It gets me to think. It's all around ...

You know when you close your eyes, and you don't know exactly what color you're looking at? You know when you look around you, without moving your head? And you ...

When I close my eyes, I see a slideshow of all the things I forgot about you and I close them for days to just try to grasp everything I ...

It's a lot better than the first chapter. I do have a strong sense of who Connor is, but Justin is still a mystery. I do not feel any real ...

- Ross, my dear. Your writing is good, but descriptions seem to be your weak point. They are still a part of writing I am working on. You depend greatly ...

Alright. This poem does seem to be a very.. Vent-ish sort of thing. I can really feel raw, unbridled emotion rolling off of it. I can hear rock in the ...

1. In Spain, I favoured white to make up for bloodstained hands. And on a day spent in high heels; I made my way down a marble staircase to meet ...

I’ve never been good at Lyrical Poetry, or just poetry in general so I really admire you for pulling it off so nicely. There is a nice steady beat to ...

I wondered how I got here, with the lower hand in the fight against my worst enemy. Again. How we ended up in the same green field, in the early ...

Cracks in the Sidewalk- Critique Basic ideas: 1. Liz and Jack have a rocky relationship. 2. Jack is a homosexual male who lives in a somewhat strict catholic household. 3. ...