xKelle_Bellex

You were hospitalized on Valentine’s Day. I hoped we could pull magic out of our sleeves, and help you live long enough to see the New Year. The hospital smells ...

This is just another one of my mental blurbs. It's like two different poems, but I honestly don't know how to separate it since it's also oddly connected. Also, the ...

This poem reaches for so many different things, and falls short on almost every one of them. I'm really not sure how that happened. Nothing in this poem matches up ...

This is very David Bowie like, which is why I enjoy this so much. It makes me chuckle and smile. The last line especially was good. There is a bit ...

Calix is a very interesting character. He seems fairly well developed, but Chad seems a bit mysterious. I'm very anxious to know about him. This is a oneshot, evidently, and ...

The lyrics don't seem too personal. Yes you mention the feelings, but they don't seem deep enough to be personal, granted this was written on a whim. I suggest trying ...

I enjoy the repetition of the word "Pretty." Usually it's lame, but in this song it works. Well this song actually has quite a bit of repetition, but it's not ...

Oooh. It's splendiferous. However, the song isn't that deep. It just really only shows surface emotions and such... But then again that seems to be rather common when it comes ...

This touched my heart. Cancer is a saddening topic, and honestly I did not expect that to come out of this poem. I honestly teared up a little. This was ...

Your body is my canvas, and although I own no paints, (They dried up underneath my bed amidst a pile of old children’s toys and lost puzzle pieces that are ...

Usually, I hate Haikus. However, yours is full of pulchritude. I do really love the visual imagery in this one. It's so gentle, but for something in such a small ...

Despite the fact that the rhyming is a little stereotypical, I do adore the story that this poem is conveying. Music is a beautiful thing, a beautiful inspiration. I am ...

i Your heart is so tied up caged behind a series of ivory; it makes me cringe to know I’m the same way. ii I’m not a scumbag like you… ...

I applaud your geekiness. This is truly a very amusing piece of work, I was smiling the whole time. I liked this. However, it wasn't too visual so... 4/5

This is a very nice, raw, emotional-- I guess you could say song. It reminds me vaguely of Flyleaf, but that's probably because I imagine the singer singing this one. ...