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Hey Dragongirl! I like that you've changed POV for this chapter. It's another way of changing up the classic fairy tale to make your piece more original. As always, your ...

Hey there, Dragongirl! I was a bit sad to see that you stopped posting 'Hook', so when I saw this I knew I was going to have to read it, ...

Hey there misstoria! I like the way the MC talks to the reader. It's a great way of making us really hear her voice and find out what kind of ...

Hey Ayla! I have to agree with the other reviewers and say that you have wonderful imagery in this piece. You have just enough subtlety in this piece to make ...

Hey there Alex! Welcome to YWS! I hope you have an awesome time here :) When it comes to your story, I really enjoyed it. I guessed that the sisters ...

Hey there creativityrules! Gosh. This was so darn cute! I mean, aww :D I love it. You seem to capture the MC's feelings beautifully, with her thoughts and the way ...

Hey Writer97! Thanks for requesting a review! I don't have much time right now, and the piece is pretty long anyway, but I'll give you some of my thoughts. All ...

Hey there Cailey! This story was so lovely. The way you wrote it allowed me to paint the scenes beautifully and the whole piece flowed nicely. It was easy to ...

Hey Walker! You know I love your writing, eh? I mean, it was so sad! At first I thought the girl he was describing was a small child. I thought ...

Hey there mistie! I don't have time for a proper review - my tea's almost ready - but I just wanted to give you some quick advice. Slow it down. ...

Hey there! Can I just say how great your imagery was? I mean, the whole thing with the sun and the red river. Lovely! I liked how part one and ...

Hey Pink! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this. I promise I didn't forget. Life just got in the way a bit. I haven't reviewed for a ...

Hey Walker! I really do think you have a talent for telling a story without dialogue. I can't wait to read your nano novel if you post :) You're great ...

Hey there Confetti! I like the idea of this. It's a well known fact that people who have been to war usually come back a different person. It can stay ...

Hey Walker! So, I'm not going to pretend to know what this is actually about, but I'm going to tell you that I liked it. In my head, it was ...