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Hey =] This isn't a genre that I usually read, but having been off of YWS for so long, I fancied a change of scenery/genre for once. And I'm glad ...

Hey =] I'm back to review part two, although the reviewer above already seems to have pointed out everything that I had planned to. I like the way the story ...

Hey =] I don't have time to give this the proper review that it deserves, and frankly I don't think I can; I struggled to find mistakes or things I'd ...

Hey Silversun =] Nice start to a story - the concept already has me interested and wanting to know more. Sureal already noted most of the main nit-piks, but I ...

Hey =] I like the idea you have for this story; it seems original and that's a good thing in my opinion. There's nothing worse than reading the same old ...

Hey =] I'm back! Anyway, I can now see why the prologue is the prologue as this part seems to be set some time on from the last part. I ...

Hey =] I don't think there's any real point in me attempting to review this properly - mainly because the other reviewers have done such a great job already. I ...

Hey =] So I liked this so far and I could only find a couple of nit-piks to point out =] .’ but I think you should make the full ...

Hey =] I haven't reviewed a piece of work for at least four months, so I'm feeling a bit rusty, but I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this ...

Hey Sela =] I'm sorry that it's taken me this long to reply to you - I've been taking a break from YWS =] So... As usual I loved it ...

Hey youreit =] Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. So... It seems that the reviewers above have pointed out everything that I would have said, ...

Hey youreit =] I'm back for chapter two! “Yeah, Mom, I’ll be there in about five minutes.” “I can’t wait to see you! Are you sure you can’t go just ...

Hey youreit =] So I enjoyed reading this =] I agree with all that the other reviewers have said, but I have one more suggestion for you. room and found ...

Hey nixonblitzen =] We can't have a story with no reviews now, can we =] So... I'm going to review this as I read, okay? Now, on with the review ...

Hey nixonblitzen =] I think I shall take a look at this for ya' So... It was one of those kitschy places where they hung black and white photographs - ...