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Re: The One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager (Prologue)
Hey! I like the sound of this! I, for one, am fed up of trawling through books about vampires to find a book with a decent story line. I can't ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Smiley Face [Chapter 1]
Hey Wariofart! I'm going to take a look at this for ya! 1. Third or First person? - So, you said that you are torn between using third or first ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Finding the Ocean [Contest Entry] EDITED
Hey Jenthura! First off, I'd like to say well done! I saw this contest, but couldn't think of a single thing to write about. You're obviously a lot more creative ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: The Great Blood Heist [unfinished]
Hey! So, I'm going to attempt to review this for you. The others have done a brilliant job pointing out most things anyway, so I'm sorry if I'm not much ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Jagged
Hey pointe! Thanks for the follow by the way :) So, I saw that you were entering Teardrop's contest too, so I thought I'd take a look at your entry ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
Hey! I liked this. The plot seems interesting so far and you've got me intrigued to find out what's going to happen next. Nit-piks; If I looked him the eyes, ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: What will we amount to?
Hey cjscoot! So. I think this was a nice little piece :) It was short, but this struck me as flash fiction rather than a story anyway, so the length ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
Hey emalily! Okay, so I have no idea how to review this so I'm sorry if what I say isn't very constructive :P Really, I just wanted to say how ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: McDonald's
Hey! Like Lemikita, I loved this too :) Your writing is brilliant and I'm jealous that you're always posting new and interesting stories on here - I'd love to be ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: We never were
Hey Catri! I just stumbled across this piece and after reading it, thought it deserved a review :) So. Wow. This was full of so much emotion. Raw and real. ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Two halves of a mother
Hey! This review isn't going to be very constructive, but I just couldn't read the story and not comment. I thought your piece was brilliant, if sad. Honestly, it pulled ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)
Hey Skins! I hope this is okay :) I haven't read any of the other reviews so I'm sorry if I repeat anything. What happened to her? This may just ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Through the Storm
Hey! I thought this was brilliant. You captured a moment of devastation well in your descriptions and I could really imagine myself standing with Katherine amongst the rubble. I did ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later.
Hey! I thought I'd take a shot a reviewing this for you, seeing as you reviewed mine :) So, first impressions. It seems like you have a good start to ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: The Harpist
Hey Elinor! I had a quick read of you poem before I read this, just for some background. I thought this was so sad. Your MC was so lonely and ...
Jan 31, 2011