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Hey Other one! This is a review to say thanks for reading and reviewing my contest entry :) I had an urge to open my mouth and say it I ...

Hey Jenthura! I was sad to see that this had no comments, so I'm going to try my best to review it for you :) 1. Nit-piks - Every since ...

Hey there Mrs Darcy! I really liked this. I agree with the other reviewers who have said it's relatable and that's what makes it so good. You make it so ...

Hey lily! I have read part one, but Azila did such an awesome job on reviewing it, that I would have just ended up writing a pointless review. I'll try ...

Hey Skins! I read this a couple of days ago but didn't have time to review, so I'm back now, but sadly I don't really have anything constructive to say ...

Hey Maddy! I thought this was really cute. The title drew me in and the story didn't disappoint. It was short, but then you had a word count to stick ...

Hey Kafka! I haven't really got time for a very constructive review, but I just wanted to say that this was great. I didn't really understand the ending and I ...

Hey Lilicia! I really liked this. Your descriptions were brilliant and didn't sound at all forced or over written. The plot was interesting and you had me hanging on every ...

Hey Elinor! I haven't been in the reviewing mood of late, but after reading this, I felt like I wanted to review again. So thanks! It was short, so we ...

Hey Amissa! I think you have an interesting story here. The plot itself wasn't very original - boy meets girl at a party and they hook up. But you managed ...

Hey Sakura! I'm back to review the second half as promised :) I haven't read what the other reviewers have said, so forgive me if I repeat anything. from the ...

Hey Chryssa! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) 1. Nit-piks - Shelly sat at the kitchen table, around her the morning sun casting golden ...

Hey Sakura! I know you said this isn't finished but you reviewed a piece of my work so I thought I'd return the favour :) So, nit-piks first; I stood ...

Hey Esther! I'm back again :) This was so cute! Like seriously, I'm overcome with jealously right now. If only I could write romance stories without making the reader want ...

Hey Esther! Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the humour that ran throughout the piece, both in the dialogue and narration. Your characters were all brilliant too - ...