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Hey there Jennya! I think this wasn't a bad story. I liked the take on it; that she thought death was beautiful, rather than dark and terrifying. Your descriptions were ...

Hey again Otherone! I'm back for more :) So, I think this part has room for improvement. I like it as it is, but I feel like it needs fleshing ...

Hey there Otherone! I'm glad you came back to this story. I really did like it! I like the parts you've added on. We get to see more of Trevor, ...

Hey there! I love the song this story is based on, so I was always going to want to like the story :) It has real potential. I don't want ...

Hey there Octave! I haven't been in the reviewing mood lately, but I couldn't help but comment on this. I really liked everything about it. The pace, descriptions, characters. I'm ...

Hey there! You've already gotten a lot of great reviews, all pointing out the things I wanted to mention, especially the grammar and formatting. I do just want to reiterate ...

Hey there! I really do like the way you describe things - even though it meant I really could imagine the gory scenes ;) I didn't spot any mistakes so ...

Hey there! I think this piece has potential. It's realistic, which is what makes it a joy to read. I'm sure almost everyone has been in the same situation as ...

Hey there! I think I understand what this piece is about; temptation and whether it's worth it or not? But the problem is, you use so much flowery language, that ...

Hey there! I saw Christina Perri lyrics in a sig on YWS a couple of weeks ago and now I absolutely love her song 'Jar of hearts' :) I think ...

Hey there! I won't bother nit-piking the mistakes that I noticed because I know the point of this piece isn't to be grammar perfect - it's the content that counts. ...

Hey there! I've entered this contest too, so I thought I'd pop by and see what I'm up against. I wish I hadn't now :P This story was great. It ...

Hey there! I think this story has potential - it just needs fleshing out a bit. At the moment, we get a good sense of the MC at the start ...

Hey there, Italy! I think this was smartly done. It was an interesting format having the letters and then the piece at the end, detailing the girl running away/leaving her ...

Hey there! I clicked on this because it has the same title as a song I love by the Temper Trap. That aside though, I think this has potential. You ...