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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Give Me Your Hands Part 1

    Dave grabbed Ben's shirt and looked threateningly down his eyes. He could see the fear. He wanted to smile, but it would spoil the thrill that came with knowing Ben ...

    Mar 11, 2010


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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