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Although it does seem to lack deep emotion, I liked it. :) There were a few lines that I especially liked. "I wish that I could look into your mind, ...

I have to agree, I love this poem. It's so full of imagery and I love the way it just flows. I cannot find any criticism for it. Wonderful job! ...

I love the fact that it flows so smoothly and it's not fake. It's very sincere and has a real feeling to it. Very nice job. I don't really have ...

I don't mean to just repeat what has been said, but this really is a very beautiful poem. I don't think I even possess the ability to write that beautifully. ...

Thank you, everyone, for your "constructive criticism." I know it's not the best poem. It was just something I wrote one day when I was bored and thinking of my ...

I really like it. It's really dark and gloomy compared to what I write, but I think it's awesome because it's like you poured your emotions out into this poem. ...

You make me feel, unlike any other. You take away the pain and all that I suffer. You make me feel beautiful, and love what's inside. No longer do I ...

Wow. I agree, I don't think it's 'religious' as much as it is spiritual. The poem was very beautiful.

I really like it. It reminded me of my father. I think you did a really good job. :)

I like it. :)