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Re: The Ball
I like this. Really clever. Nice imagary. :D
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Re: It Turned On The Lights
WOW. yes - there are some TINY mistakes but overall fantastic content.
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: The night comes back to me
Loved it. I could imagine everything. Very sad. You could polish it but that's easily done.
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Wild and free
Nice content and very sweet.
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Re: Boredom
I quite like it - yeah you could spice it up a bit - but its quite cool writing poems about not being able to write poems.
Apr 14, 2008