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rip the veil rip me from my veil I do not want it. (nice. I like how you said 'rip me' instead of ripping the veil.) take the vision of ...

Not sure if this should be lyric poetry or dramatic (or narrative for that matter) but this is my best guess so here goes. Gold So the sky, it was ...

The Awakening ~Kate Chopin

the historian! I am glad. and HeadInTheClouds, our avatars are very similar. hehe. =P

I think that'd be cool. as long as it's one of the cool ones like you see in the movies. O_O

I really enjoyed reading this. your imagery is well-developed, though a little lacking in the description area. I would suggest more of that, like in the beginning of the second ...

what Shriek said. O_O but really, the shortness did bother me. you didn't seem to put as much into it as you did the first chapter. however, your descriptions are ...

not much to say that hasn't already been said, but whatever. =P this is pretty great writing you've got here. the globe description was fantastic! and I love the way ...

5/10. it's pretty okay.

8/10 because it looks like Ville Valo.

pleasure to meet you alanna. pirates is a great movie!

so many gemini's!!! gorsh. my poetry, well....people call it abstract but i think that's pretty ridiculous. and i love fantasy, historical fiction, stuff like that.

sorry about your aunt, flemzo. if you ever feel like talking....:] and virgo and cancer go very well together. very well. ;]

leo. we make great friends too! nice to meet you.

haha, thank you both. my dad is a capricorn. cancer and capricorn get along well, so that's good. :P