writingmouse_13

It's so sad but I really love it, it's beautiful and it really paints a picture in my head of the person who is narrating the song. I get the ...

I liked it alot, at first, with the familiar names and tenancies from the Twilight books, I thought it might be another fanfic, but as I read on, I've got ...

I liked it, you've already been corrected on other things so I'll just praise it. I thought it gave a very insightful view into the traditions and views of Wicca. ...

Amazing, while I was reading, I couldn't tear my eyes from the page! It's very good, you've got all the right stuff, details, and you really pulled me into the ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I realize I made some mistakes, but my excuse for that is that I had just written it and stupidly forgot to edit ...

Thankyou! I've never done this before, so your info's great help! Trust me, if I have any questions, I'll tell you! I think I've got the basics figured out, I've ...

I heard a loud noise against the window of my mothers room. I went to investigate, and there in the bushes was a beautiful hawk that was brown with white ...

I liked it, not many people know the scientific word for werewolf. Pandapez has already corrected your spelling errors, so I'll just tell you what I think it needs. Yes, ...

Yes, I agree with Blink, and people have told me this to. Your story needs to take time to develop, maybe describe the characters more and give more details, or ...

Hi, my name is writingmouse_13, and right now I feel like I'm at an Alcoholic's Anonymous meeting!! Anyway, I'm really behind the times, I hardly know what chat rooms are! ...