writingmouse_13

Okay, this doesn't rhyme, it's just supposed to be deep I guess. Don't shoot the writer! Here goes!! (P.S. I wrote this during math class so it's not too inspired...) ...

Thanks for the PM! :D I didn't see anything that needed correcting. I really like the story, I'm so curious about what will happen! Can't wait for the rest!

Ooh! I like it, but you had alot of dashes in the first couple of paragraphs and the part where she is saying "She didn’t know if this was a ...

Dragonfale Rock!!!!!!! Sorry, just felt like saying that. Harry Potter Puppet pals is hilarious too! ......

Wow! Did not expect that! Can't wait till your done with the next part!

Thanks for the PM! Great as always. I love how in this part the emotions change from frightened to exhilaration and exitement. It's such a big change. Can't wait to ...

You already know that I love the story, but this helped! The story is getting so good!

..... That was really creepy... But totally awesome! My skin was crawling! Nuf said! It was great! Who cares about grammer when the story is awesome! Sorry, I'm being too ...

Oh my gosh! I'm not going to correct anything because I didn't see anything to fix. You've put in a ton more details. Thanks for the PM, can't wait to ...

Thanks for the PM, I didn't think this part was slow paced at all! Any who down to buisness. "It felt like she had been frozen for days, the only ...

Like everyone else has been saying, very creepy... I'm starting to think this is a ghost story, but so far your writing has suprised me! I really don't know what's ...

Again I have been beaten to the editing... But it was great!! I love the story, I think I know what happens next... or maybe not. This story is so ...

Well as usual, someone has beaten me to the chase. I cannot see anything else to correct that hasn't been already. I like the style that you write with, but ...

I love the new chapter! I have absolutely no clue what's going on, but that's ok. I think it's important that you have this mystery element in the story, most ...

Hi! Nice to meet you (meet as in see your screen name online and talk to you through pm's) anyway, hi! I'm new to, but people here are really helpful. ...