writingjoy

Good poem! I like how you compared the days how you spent your summer on the last stanza: the late mornings, and funny frights. The short shorts and tank tops. ...

I think your poem is okay. Not too good, or bad. Just in the middle. I think you can make some connections with some specific parts of the poem. For ...

(at Elinor) Hi! I write stories with action, a little drama, and ones that involve friendship. Oh, and I'm not really working on any major projects. Nice you to meet ...

Hi! I'm writingjoy and I'm a fan of writing. (and that's why I joined this site :D ) I write poetry and short stories--not to mention that I love critiques! ...

I like that poem about friendship! :D Your writing is nice and they are placed in a good order. Yet, I agree with El Finito. You may want to somehow ...

Nature's Two Hands A satisfied sigh is all I want from cool whispers of the wind whisking upon the calm lush leaves of a tree that’s blushing itself a lively ...