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I can feel a lot of meaning and feelings behind this poem. I loved how you repeated U CAN... BE GRATEFUL! after each stanza. I liked it! Great job! ...But ...

Wind Panther “Looook oooout,” whispered a slurred voice. “Huh?” I muttered half-unconsciously and turned in my covers. Massively tangled brown hair teased my sleepy eyes as I blinked to glance

This poem is one hundred percent pure and beautiful! I wish I was the one who wrote it. :) What I love most about it is each of the lines ...

Did you just type this up randomly? :) The last line of the haiku seemed kind of random to me. I would suggest writing a more lengthy poem rather than ...

Ehh... done only two. :( I'm gonna try to do some more... before I go to bed!

Hey there Litehawk! I loved your poem. The rhyming was nice and reasonable, unlike some others with nonsense lines forced to rhyme. As others already mentioned, just use plain black ...

Hey Soleil! That's a really awesome poem you wrote there. I'll start off with the things I really loved about it. singing, swaying in the wind, reaching up to the ...

I tattle Demeter! She's been the first person that helped me out on YWS! Also, Snoink for being the first person to critique my writing. It was a very helpful ...

I'm a newbie on YWS, and I think YWS is an awesome site! (I posted this on my blog too) This is what I thought about this site-- it's the ...

I wanted a website where I can share my writing. (I was originally a member of writing.com) So, then I went to to search for a good, recommended writing site. ...

Snoink: Oh, hi Snoink! I checked on my poem first before the Welcome Mat. Thanks for the useful critique! To Both: Thanks for helping me out... (as for all the ...

(Holy cow) Gee; thanks Snoink! I see your point there, and it makes a lot of sense. I'll watch out for my use of adjectives the next time I write ...

Nice poem! I'm going to list the positives first. I liked how you said: I can dance with the fibbers; Waltzing in a snowflake garden. I also liked how you ...

Mo: (Thank you for that cookie) Demeter: Hi Demi! (I'm going to call you Demi) Yup, we did chat a few times. Thanks for helping me out! P.S. I love ...

I really like this poem! You told the readers when you don't feel so great, you look at the moon. But the only thing I'll add to it is description. ...