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Re: Shotgunsuns and Tiger Lillies Chapter 1
Chapter 1 "Ay, Rose. Got a smoke?" I ask my partner, shaded in the shadow made by the buzzing sign at the old gas station. The only noises are the ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Stars
That was most likely the best poem I've ever read! It's great! Most people might be scared to write great love stuff like this and normally I don't like it ...
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Re: Cupcake
Hm! I like it! It's simple and very cute! Awesome! Half people's writing at first is like this but they scratch it out because they think it's dumb. But YOU ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Monster in the Night
Gosh, read something OTHER than that dumb Twilight book! Anyone can tell that you're one of those Twilight-obsessed people. That series isn't even good. And YES I read it. Try ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Monster
Ooo! That was great! Really deep and dramatic in general. It's just one of those pieces of work that need to be out there. I can't see how I could ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Tomorrow
That poem was nice. I think it gave a good visual and a good mood and/or tone. Maybe you should do a variety of different poems. You could also write ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The morning show
The birds chirp above my head, Singing songs for all to hear, Flying across the orange sky, A 'V' formation way up high, Flying beautys slice the air, Ever so ...
Mar 13, 2011
