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  • Other » General, General Re: The Torment of Life

    Thanks for the feedback. I definitely agree that it's difficult to read, but I was trying out a different writing style so I wanted to see what others thought.

    May 18, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: The Torment of Life

    I have two questions about my writing. One: What category would this be considered to fall under? Two: Is the use of second-person narration interesting and engaging or simply odd ...

    May 17, 2016


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites