writerwithacause

Thanks a bunch, theotherone! :)

Thanks so much, Kitty! I'll keep those things in mind.

Thanks so much, kakagirl! :)

Anybody, reviews? :D

Thank you, bugbug368! :)

Thank you so much, Isha! You've pointed out some things that I did not quite notice. Thanks so much! =D

Thank you very much, Georgie! It was written in one of my inspirational moments, hehe! Thanks again!

This is very good, I second what those above said. I like the ending as well. I love when writers leave it up to our (reader's) imagination.

This is very beautiful! I don't have any suggestions, it is simply wonderful! :)

Thanks, Upile! It seems I have to edit it!

This was beautiful. I adored your beginning! :) I agree with 322sivart on punctuation, so I will not repeat the corrections.

Thank you kindly, Amanda!

Thank you, Alex! :)

Thank you very much! Oh, I haven't read that book, but I searched it on Google and it seems like a good read. I'll look for it in the bookstores. ...

Thank you so much for the review, lovethelifeulive! It made my day! :) I am truly honoured that you think so.