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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Raoul versus Erik (The Phantom)

    You're missing the point. It's not about Erik (evil part) vs Raoul (good part), love -- as described in both the movie and book -- is more than this, it ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 11: A Rose Left Alone

    Thanks, IcyFlame! I'll make sure to correct and re-write some parts when I'll edit this later. :D As for the image, I've mentioned in the first chapter, it is a ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Triad

    Not only you'd make a great reviewer, turned out that you're a great writer as well. My finest compliments for what you have here!

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Big City Girl prologue

    Hey there! This is quite an insteresting story. I know you asked for a review, but I see that all things have been pointed out before, and I really don't ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 5: The Blooming Rose, The Blooming Love

    Reviews, anybody? :)

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 7: The Misery And Suffering Of A Rose

    Reviews, anybody? :)

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    I miss you. I hate how it's true. I love you. The words I wish Ididn't feel. -- nice stanza, simple yet beautiful. I hunger for you. The feeling roars ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Art of Love

    Anybody else willing to review?

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 1: A Red Rose Among The Others

    Thanks to both of you! :)

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 2: The Thorns Of A Rose

    Thanks, Kitty! :D

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Time

    Thank you everybody for your suggestions!

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 6: Withered Leaves, Withered Love

    Hey there, thanks a lot for the review! Amazing how many mistakes I do without realising. xDD Is this supposed to be maybe? Or perhaps? Exactly! I hope he's going ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Inspiration

    Thank you so much to both of you! :)

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Seaside

    Hey, that was good! Just wanted to tell you this, I have no corrections to make. :)

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Ch 2: The Thorns Of A Rose

    Thank you, ADBrown!

    Feb 28, 2011


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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