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thanks!!

thanks!!!

I wish it was just an excerpt... but alas, it is not. I MIGHT write more someday, but until then, it's just a story...

I knew I used "before" too many times! (Should've changed that!!) thanks for your review!!!!!

Thanks!! I will try that next time!!

That last paragraph was so sad! touching, true to feelings, and well written but very sad. (No need to be sorry. I liked all of this!) you might not want ...