writergirl528

Thanks for providing a thorough response! I am aware that I have some trouble with dialogue (as do most people) but I will try to take your suggestion about the ...

I have a request for any reviewers! Though I'm a little late in saying this since some people have already commented. Would you be willing to take a careful look ...

I have a request for any reviewers! Though I'm a little late in saying this since some people have already commented. Would you be willing to take a careful look ...

Thank you. I'd like to see what you think of the next few chapters as well, since I use them to introduce a few new characters. Kamorina isn't the only ...

I like your idea of showing it. I may have some difficulty with that for the first few chapters because it's the exposition, and I'm sort of writing mostly the ...

Thanks for your advice. I don't think I'm taking this where you expect, but you might be right and my entire storyline is a total cliche. I was trying to ...