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Okay, I'm going to be honest here... I have never read anything like this! Yes, there are horrors and there are romances, but this one fit those two genres together ...

This is an absolutely powerful poem filled with sorrow and emotion. It drew me in from the first sentence and kept me reading until the last. A very eerie, beautiful ...

Thanks for the critique! I have been thinking about shortening the beginning a little and this is after all, only the first draft, so when I rewrite I will definitely ...