writer_ally_reader

wow. I thought that was really good! I liked it a lot. It has a nice flow to it from beginning to end. I really felt the powerful emotions of ...

hi..... I thought this was very good! i liked it a lot. I like the part where it says: I don't care about the fashion because I've got my own ...

Okay.... I thought the actual story was okay but you made some mistakes i am going to point out..... You repeatedly spelt the word desert, as dessert. but on a ...

Over all i liked it! short and sweet poems about normal everyday things usually bore me but this was OK! It sends out a pretty positive message and makes you ...

This is just the first part so more clues as to what is going on and more details to come! It is a very rough draft so please give me ...

Ya it was just something that i felt like writing....very is just for any war or people who have fought....i was thinking of basing it on one war but then ...

That was absolutely amazing!! definitly continue!! i thought that you got the characters exactly and it seemed exactly like the actualy twilight( i mean like the writing style and how ...

I liked it. I think it needs more description though. Since it is short you have to make every word count. Choose your words carefully and use them to paint ...

They are here among us, in our hearts and our minds, they brought us peace and love of every kind, We cherish their memory, its the least we could do, ...

That was good! I liked the descriptive similes and metaphors you used. It did sound a lot like the scene in eclipse. Maybe try to come up with a scene ...

I think it is good! very interesting and quite compelling. Some of it doesn't seem to flow so much but the story is good!

i liked it- i had a sort of mysterious edge to it. Very compelling. I also like how it wasn't long. People tend not to read things if they see ...

The scene displayed on the far side of the riverbank was odd. Standing below the high, stone walls of the city, the guard on duty was puzzled by the sight. ...

Hey! As you can see i am pretty new here too! i absolutly love the twilight series! But my writing tends to lean towards other kinds of fantasy! I love, ...

Hi! okay so i am new too! And my writing topics are practically the same as yours! I absolutly love fantasy though and am pretty stuck on that right now. ...