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Sweet in summer, cups of snow, Take wings of fancy, and ascend, The crowd at the ball game For things we never mention, Auld Coila now may fidge fu' fain, ...

The millions of twinkling stars dotted majestically on the vast cloudless night sky seemed to be holding a conference with each other. This is a little wordy in my opinion. ...

oh srry, i was confused ill edit

oh srry, i was confused ill edit

Jackie- Jackie twirled in front of the mirror thinking about how lucky she was. She was very greatful to her best friend Allysa who had forced her to come to ...

Name- Jaqueline McAvoy, after the wedding Jaqcueline Bently (called Jackie) Occupation- Is a lawyer living in London, very organized, Sophie's older sister, bride Age- 24 years old Appearance- about 5

wow thanks! sorry to disapoint you, but at the end, he won't be that disgusting, but i will pm you as soon as i put up more, but this week ...

These are really good, I like the second one best :D

thanks a lot, i will change those things, but since it was my story for nanowrimo, i didn't do much editing, i kind of just wrote.... :D :shock:

lol, sorry, but when i first put it on there, it wouldn't do it, but i'll try again

I know its kind of long, sorry, you don't have to critique the whole thing. Thanks ~writer564 Title? Lawrence blinked the sleep out of his eyes. It was hard to ...

saw a giant

thanks, yeah i just found that today :oops:

You did really good finishing up this story. Good job!!!!!!!!!

oh ,wow-- this is amazing. I would never have expected it to end like this/ You did a great job on this story!! You kept me interested the whole time ...