writer4lifee

Wow! this was VERY inspirational, like gleek456 said, this gave me insight of how i have viewed some things. This part is exceptionally true Used to be blind,Somehow opened my ...

I really enjoyed this piece. I like where you say I am a fool to doubt my feelings, because it is what most people go through. Good job with this, ...

I was sixteen when I found out that I was kidnapped at the age of five. All I knew was that I had been 'adopted' at the age of three. ...

Hey there! I reallllllly enjoyed this though there were a few minor problems. Like someone said, you shouldve stated whether or not it was a girl or guy, im thinking ...

Good job at the drawing. The colors may be "girly" but they bring attention to the peice

This was really well written, i really enjoyed how you put the flashback into it. Maybe you could elaborate more about why Sam is mad at her mom and explain ...

This was really good actually. I really enjoyed how you wrote it. You wrote about a good topic too. All in all, i say good job (:

Hey there, im not sure if it is just me but i really didn't understand this. Maybe if it could add a bit more interpretation it could be more clear ...

That was interesting (: I think the rythm needed work as the person above me said but overall it was really good

You did a REALLY Great job with this! For real! It really brought tears to my eyes and it was kind of similar to my life experience in a way. ...

*ELI POV* "You still love me, admitt it." Julia whispered. Eli arose in panick. The clock showed 7:30 am, he was early for school but didnt want to go back ...

amazing!

Great poem! this reminded me so much of my sisters

Thanks So Much For The Comments - You Guys Have Been Very Helpful -- Im Going To Think This Story Over And Rewrite This Chapter , See Ya Soon (: