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What I liked about this poem was that you explored more then just one meaning of the word lost I also rely like the first stanza it grabbed my attention ...

hmmm, I actually like the repetition it sort of caught my attention and made me want to finish the poem, if that makes any sense. There were two lines that ...

Wow, this is haunting, it's very good, you had my heart beating twice as fast by the time I reached the end. No! He won’t. He can’t. He does. I ...

Alright, sooo I'm not new but I've been gone for ooo, a little over a year now so I thought I'd reintroduce myself if that was alright? Anyway, I'm wraithfound ...

WOOHOO! High five man! *virtually high fives you* I've read many of your other poems and this one seems like the best one you've done so far! You have improved ...

This poem was very good! I particularly like this phrase: You showed me what it was like to cry And what it was like to fall in love And now ...

I loved this poem! I particularly liked how you described the relation between the narrator and their father. Good job, keep writing! God Bless, wraithfound

I thought the poem didn't really seem to flow at the begining. Also I noticed some spelling errors, but all in all it was a wonderful poem and I hope ...

I loved this poem! The way it was written and told and well everything! You've done really well for your first poem! Keep up the good work:)

Hey every one! Thanks for the welcomes:) Ya, I'm HUGE fan of Stargate Atlantis! My avatar is their worst enemy the Wraith. (for those who didn't know)

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I looked up at the sunset as it sank out of veiw. But the stars came out and shined queit bright. "How many stars are there?" I said to myself, ...

hmm, it's okay. The rhyming is a little strange it sounds like a ...... oh what's it called...... Fortune Cookie! Looking at your other poems I noticed some one else ...

I like it! I watch Doctor Who as well though not as big a fan as most:) The only thing that really caught my eye was that you seemed to ...