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Re: Three Small Thoughts
hey these are nice. are they connected in some way? or are they seperate? u have some really pretty phrases. the idea of the last poem is a bit trite ...
Feb 28, 2005 -
Re: Driftwood
hey. i seem to be a bit more harsh than everyone else around here so dont be offended or anything. u have some really nice imagery, here's some comments u ...
Dec 26, 2004 -
Re: Not that simple.
hey wulie (cute name) im not sure how serious people are in their critiquing around here so dont get too offended k? And I swear I wont let you win ...
Dec 21, 2004
