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Re: Nostalgia in the Afternoon (Song Prompt Contest)
Okay, so, I wrote this for Jasminebell's song prompt contest, Off my second favorite Panic! At The Disco song 'Nine in the Afternoon.' I rather enjoy the song. Hope I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Jarred Heart
Alright, so, this is good, and I know how hard it is to get into a song and base a story on that. This being said, however, you needed to ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Wishes with Consequences - 1
Alright, so, Firstly, you need more description. In your first scene, it's just dialouge, and I can't get a good feel of what is going on. Try going into more ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Brokenhearted
Okay, so, that was brief. Expand it with more about the speakers problems. This really just seems like a first stanza of something that could be much much more. With ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Another Obnoxious Blade
Okay, so, firstly, I wanted to apologize for taking way too long on this. It's long story, but I'm here now! So, firstly, you move really fast. Slow down, let ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Title Totally Unrealted To The Song
Teenage angst, brought to you by, well, me. Oh! Notice there isn't a chorus? Smile pretty and hide the pain ‘Cause you’re not allowed to be down’, you say And ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Dream on
Full name: Maria Emily Wells Age (15-17pref): 16 History: Maria ran away becuase she was sick of people pretending to know what was best for her. She is a petty ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
backstage.JPG ahaha, thank you! Harispray=love. YOu look awesome.
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Book signings are life. Me and bloggist/author Neil Pasricha (My book message says 'Stay Beautiful, Stay awesome.' I just realized this.) lunapic_130480881169552_1.jpg
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
So, you guys may get an actual photo of me one day soon. Or not. We'll see. Um, Lavenderblue told me how to do my nails lunapic_130474102339021_1.jpg
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The member above me is awesome because...
You are awesome because you are totally fearless, and really don't care what anyone else thinks about you. I seriously admire that.
May 4, 2011 -
Re: No. 12
Alright, so, you have a lot of description in there. Your description is strong, and that's good, but your mostly telling the reader, you need to show them to play ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
# 21 Thanks. Thanks for all the effort, you know It really matters to me. THanks for all the screaming and the yelling. Making me feel like crap on a ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: 'Last Years Wishes Are This Years Apologies'
# 20 Ringing bells, little rats Hidden in the rafters The clocks are ringing low and rumbling She doesn't like the sound Doesn't like the insitent ringing She doesn't like ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
8/10 It's pretty good. I enjoy it.
Apr 24, 2011