wonderland

There really wasn't much to review. I guess it was a quick, interesting read, but thats it. Good work, Wicked Wonder

Hey, Welcome to the YWS. I'm Wicked Wonder Firstly, there were way too many grammar and spelling mistakes and that made it hard to concentrate. Just proof read it. I've ...

I will be ready! Seriously! I'll have my best piece of writing, and someone to make sure I phone in!

Of Explanations and Sneak Attacks In Ruthiorn, there are exactly three ranks under royalty. The lowest are the peasants. To be a peasant, you must not come from a pure-bred ...

Okay, so I haven't read the other parts, but I think your really missing some emotion. This whole chapter seemed pretty flat, with zero emotion. Take how you'd feel in ...

That was really good. It's really played with my senses, and I found your vocabulary pretty interesting. The only thing I didn't like was your first stanza. Just remove that ...

That was very strong. It actually gave me shivers, that how strong it was. It was well-written and beautiful, in an odd way. Congrats ~Wicked Wonder.

For your age, that was very well written. I liked your take on love (Usually, the girl is in love, not the boy) Your emotion is good, and so is ...

This piece is pretty flat. You have way too much dialogue with zero description behind it, making the piece a fair bit boring. I'm going to read back and read ...

I wrote this for my grade eleven drama class. I want to do my ow monologue, but my drama teacher wont consider it unless it is perfect. Please go super ...