wonderland

Well, you did cliche really well. Your MC is good and strong, and you show us her doubts and her wild side. Yes, there are some mistakes that you can ...

Yay imagery! That was really cool. For writers block, I always listen to some of my favorite bands, usually their music helps me. Good luck ~WickedWonder

That was really pretty. I have this huge smile on my face. It was a really strong, beautiful poem, which did not end with death. I really felt the emotions, ...

SOrry about that! My computer failed.

YOu are really good at suspense. I really want to know whats up with Liam, but introducing Cole was a good move. As usual, you spelling and grammar are good, ...

YOu are really good at suspense. I really want to know whats up with Liam, but introducing Cole was a good move. As usual, you spelling and grammar are good, ...

Gutsy, gusty, MC! I love her! Alicia is strong, and smart, and fully non-mary-sue-ish. I also love how she ran away, that was something very non-typical. Your spelling and grammar ...

So, I'm gonna confess, that I have read nearly every Warrior book out there. you're gonna have to work super hard tp make your work original. Your grammar was a ...

It s a good beginning, with a strong, hope-fully non-mary-sue-ish MC, a nice setting and clear characters. Your description is good, except for your first paragraph My alarm went off, ...

Sam blinked through the sea spray. “Captain, it’s gaining!” The note of panic in his voice was genuine as he watched the live bear run towards the back of the ...

There can be no way in the known universe that you are two years younger then me, yet just a better writer. It's true. This is funny, smart, yet clever ...

Dante is such a sweetie-pie! Except for the whole killing thing. That was very, very, very good! I love the way it's written, so the reader feels like they actually ...

So, I found this part more believable. I'm also liking it. I have a small thing for evil characters. I also like your writing style. You have enough description and ...

Phew. For a second I thought I was reading another typical vampire story. Well, anyway your descriptions were very romantic, making the whole setting seem too good to be true. ...

I have massacred my goal! Yay staying up late and ignoring math!