wonderland

I know exactly what I'm doing 800 words a day

This was wayy better then the first draft, so good job. Janette seems like a nice, strong MC, she's witty, funny and everything a main character should be. Your spelling ...

I love your MC. Andra is smart, funny and quirky. Please keep writing ~WickedWonder

I love your writing style! It's somewhat like Laurie Halse Anderson's (She writes amazing books, like Speak. Read that if you haven't already) it's got a signature vibe from your ...

And thats it? That is a crazy amazing peice, right there! Congratulations on the piece! It's sweet and funny and quirky. Through your writing, I' just going to assume for ...

That is so sweet. Emotions captured=perfectly! Thats an awesome idea, a letter from heaven, and there are a trillion ways you could expand on that. Your description is wonderful and ...

I adore romance! Okay, so it was sort of confusing. You should italic the past, then keep the present in normal font. I really like your plot though, and your ...

That was very descriptive. I had to feeling toward your MC, because there was no emotion to make that tie. YOu could use emotion in here Isaiah was an annoyance ...

I'm not gonna lie, that was slightly confusing. A tire? Although, it is interesting and very well written. I'm anxious to read the next part, and i'll get on that. ...

Pretty good! I'm not really into poetry, but this was quite good. The only thing i'd suggest doing would separating into stanzas. That way the reader has a chance to ...

Alright. Here's a couple of pics of me. RED HEAD! i love red heads!!! Im actually thinking of pulling a Rhianna and dying my hair red.

Thats me,wearing my sisters sweater.

Don't tell us what it represents! THats no fun! Poetry is meant for the reader to figure out the meaning themselves, and my favorite part. Anyway, this was strong and ...

I was running around my room in a rush, trying to find my IPod touch. Alright, so, the first sentence is something that should hood the reader in. I have ...

You are a really good writer! This is coming along nicely, with the emotions and little cliff hangers you've put in there. Your spelling, grammar and emotions are good. I ...